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Spider-Man Movie by RAMby *ramstudios1

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Here is one that I complete in 2.5 hours pencils and inks in Manga Studio. I call it Spider-Man movie because I recorded this to show you the process on Youtube. You can watch it on my channel at MrRamstudios1 if you would like or just click here [link]. Let me know what you think of my drawing of the old web head as the great Stan Lee likes to call him.

Have a great one and as always....More to come!

This is Fan Art and is property of Marvel Comics created by Stan Lee.

Critique by ~Furyian Jan 5, 2013, 9:42:20 PM

Starting with the good, you have a good idea of body proportions and positioning. That part is very obvious and clear! You also have a good idea of perspective and using that to the advantage of the overall piece.

My only real problems:
The foreshortening of the arm, the hand might be angled just a bit to give it an easier transition between the wrist and the forearm.

The crotch area shouldn't be this flat. Men have a "package" and that should be given some definition. I'm not talking about giving him a porn pouch or a full-on boner but the flatness here is odd and distracting because your muscles are nicely done and given a good deal of weight by light and shadow. Rounding the crotch area to give it a bit of fullness would go along with the rest of the piece.

This last bit is something most ALL comic artists do.

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Critique by ~Mstevens15 Jan 5, 2013, 2:48:29 PM

Very very good spidey my friend! Your unique style really shines through here while also portraying certain similarities to many of the TASM greats! I see a lot of Ditko here(mainly in the way you did the webbing), but also a lot of McFarlene(which, coming from me should be a great compliment as his art is what got me into drawing) as others have said before me. It's got a real visual impact as his art always does. I've always thought his art sort of jumped off the page and attacked your eyes(in a good way) and that's what yours does here! But you also display your own unique style which is great all on its own! I wouldnt mind if you drew for TASM! My main problem would have to be spidey's left arm. I think you tried some foreshortening here but it kind of falls flat. It's not too too bad but some imorovement wouldn't hurt(and I say this with the utmost respect. I live your art a lot!)
Also what someone else said, the thumb in the same arm looks kinda weird. Could be a bit bigger.
One other small, small thing is the right leg. It kinda looks out of proportion but that may just be me.
Overall, this is a freaking amazing spiderman (see what I did there?)! Keep it up RAM! I love seeing your stuff and good luck with BlackStone!

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~Larryhazard Jan 16, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

This reminds of Todd, it's awesome

*ramstudios1 Jan 17, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

Thanks. Yeah, McFarlane is one of my favorite artist. When he was drawing!

~Geosammy Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Have a look

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*ramstudios1 Jan 10, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

Thats awesome! Keep up the nice work!

~Geosammy Jan 10, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

I'm so happy that you like it and thanks for favoring it as well.
It was my first "Black & White" conversion of this type.
Needless to say, that I'm not 100% satisfied with the results, but being that you like it... I feel much better about it now.
I will continue to do conversions and with time, I only see my conversions improving...
Thanks

*ramstudios1 Jan 11, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

You will only get better with time. One of my favorite things about art! Thanks again!

~Geosammy Jan 11, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Sure thing...

*Blaze-Belushi Jan 2, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

nicely done! Great work overall

*ramstudios1 Jan 2, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

Thanks very much for checking it out!

~poolshostage Jan 2, 2013

Wow awesome job!

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